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11/11/16
Wow! What an awesome take on this topic. The point of view through the eyes of a child worked really well. Maybe it's because I don't know how they do things at a mosque, but it seemed to be contradictory that Miriam couldn't hear her father preach, but she could hear him on the loudspeaker anyway. Maybe it was just the prayer though? Fantastic story!
Very intriguing! I was hooked from start to finish. Great job.
11/15/16
Oh my goodness. You have totally flipped the commonly told scenario to a whole different story line. This is fresh and something I would have never considered. Great job!
11/17/16
Engaging story from start to finish. Great storytelling told from a fresh perspective.

I wonder if he and his family will have to flee after his new faith is found out.
You did a great job on this suspenseful piece. Not only are you educating others, but delivering a powerful message. My only red ink is don't let your title give away the ending. Perhaps instead something like The Imam's Daughter would still draw people in without giving away a clue to the ending. Congratulations on ranking 10th overall. Happy Dance!
Congratulations, Gary! An excellent read, as usual.
12/12/16
You crafted a unique story with this unusual POV from the daughter. It left me wondering what type of witness she would become against her father.