The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/16
For some reason... I wasn't hungry until the last two stanzas;) Well done.
10/21/16
I love your clever use of slant rhyme in this edible poem! Each stanza perfectly showcases a separate healthy food group. I completely identify with you and ask myself the same question of your last two stanzas. (When you figure out the answer I'd love to get your advice in the form of a poem.) This is wonderful!
10/22/16
Ooooo--I love it! :)
Aaaaah - a woman after my own heart! I was trying to work up an appetite as I read the first few verses - but my rumbling tum would not comply!! But then, I came to your wonderful ending!!! My digestive juices are happy. A great poem! Congrats on your EC - well deserved.
11/04/16
Congratulations, Verna, on winning an EC award.

I ask myself that very question.
12/10/16
yum yummily-- quite a delicious piece of work.