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Mechanics were great leaving all my attention to what you wanted me to know. I was surprised for the minimal reaction to the pivotal news of cancer in the hospital and at home. But it made more sence when I saw it wasnt your focus. Then ending left me mad and feeling a bit powerless but a reality was revealed.
10/21/16
Wow... that ending, though. I mean, wow! That was unexpectedly terrifying.
You really showed "scary new normal."
11/04/16
Congratulations, Gary, on winning 10th place in the EC awards this week.

So chilling, but with a ring of truth.

The ending surprised me.
12/10/16
I pray that this isn't to become the new normal. Congratulations on your EC placing with this thought provoking piece.