The Official Writing Challenge
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10/13/16
Very moving. I love this entry. God bless.
10/15/16
Oh, I like this. Very good.
10/15/16
This poem expresses overload very well in its many images.I enjoyed it. Well written.
You deftly demonstrate the fine line between what is bearable and the tipping point in this well-crafted poem.
10/20/16
You've packed so much meaning into so few words - I almost heard them complaining about being overloaded!!!!
Congratulations on your placing. Well done.
10/20/16
Congratulations, Ann, on your EC place. It is well deserved. As I said before, I enjoyed your poem very much.
10/22/16
Wow Anne! I've always enjoyed your poetry, and this is no exception :-) i'm not much of a poet, but I was intrigued by your rhyming scheme, as well as the way you were able to articulate with perfect clarity always in the confines of the poems structure
10/27/16
Your words painted vibrant pictures, Ann. Congratulation on winning 4th place in the EC awards!
11/15/16
Lovely and enjoyable lilt to your poem.