The Official Writing Challenge
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10/14/16
Oh, I love this. So cute. As a 30 something single female, I probably should have seen then ending a mile away. And yet I was surprised. Great job.
10/15/16
Oh! This poor girl. I gained weight just reading about all the sweets! :)
10/16/16
Great story! I loved the line about more food being the fast way to a man's stomach!
This was a wonderfully light read that had me laughing throughout, especially with the surprise sprung at the end. I expect this to do well.
10/20/16
Great work here, and congrats on your EC as you pause for breath in your rapid rise through the FW ranks.
Loved the twist in the tale.
11/15/16
Hehe I was just (really!) contemplating baking some brownies, to sooth the rainy day blues. Your story sufficed. Thank you for saving me calories and broadening a smile across my face.