The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/16
Powerful ending; I didn't expect that. I pray for a revival around the world.
This is a great twist on the familiar story. I thought your POV was quite clever. Then you blew me away with the ending as well. Brilliant job!
Powerful! Captivating!
01/19/16
Great job with the topic!

Well done.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 18 overall. Happy Dance!