The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/15
Your characters' dialogue has more than a touch of Screwtape and Wormwood - though I first thought it was merely a human gossip session. I liked that suggestion that satan be reminded about having failed so often, and how you've allowed us to guess the end of this tale. Well done.
YES -- well done, indeed! C.S. Lewis would be proud! It was amusing, sort of, while it tackled a serious issue. Our ugly enemy is treacherous, and if he cannot have us, then he'll settle for making us miserable. We must never forget that.
Thanks for your talented entry!
11/20/15
I liked the dialog going on in Satan's camp of evil--especially the reference to disappointments and failures--you did a great job with the topic and sending my congrats on the recognition this received.