The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/15
Call me a Facebook Philistine if you must, but your ending left me up in the air - after a great emotional build-up.
11/14/15
Excellent writing -- but I was left a bit bewildered, as well. I've read it again, and am still unsure about the ending.
You do have talent with putting words to paper; keep writing!