The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/15
Beautiful and so true.

Well done.

Thank you for this lovely poem of truth.

God bless~
04/20/15
I love how this builds and builds to the climax- then has the call to action. Very well done, and right on topic!
I love what you did with the topic. The ending was perfect - stand up and yet humbly bow. That was a lovely poem.
04/20/15
I agree, great last line. Your rhyme and rhythm weren't forced either. Great message.
04/21/15
I found tears coming to my eyes as I read on and on. He stood up for me... The last line says it all "Stand up for Him and humbly bow."
04/21/15
I apologize on my error as to the last line. "Stand up for Jesus and humbly bow" is what I meant.
Beautiful. Congratulations on ranking 23 overall! Happy Dance!