The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/15
Loved it!

God bless~
01/29/15
I must confess that I AM greedy sometimes (and reading about all these luscious foods is feeding that greed). :) I love each carefully chosen word, phrase, and repeating line you used. AND your generous nature SO VERY CLEVERLY stated in your final paragraph left a twinkle in my eye and a smile on my lips (and empowers my generosity, too). :)
02/02/15
What an entertaining and fun read and I really giggled at the last stanza! Well Done!
02/03/15
wonderful! Delightful! Lighthearted entertaining! Bad last stanza is the icing on the cake :-) great job
02/05/15
Well, now I'm hungry. When I was young, I never seemed to want more, more, more. But now...it's a different story. Love this entry. Congratulations, Verna, and God bless.
Verna, you sound a lot like me. Good job on this poem.
02/05/15
I was glad to see this uniquely formatted, light-hearted poem with an Editor's Choice award!! Congrats, dear VernaJ! <3