The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/15
Wow- riveting and memorable.

God bless~
Nicely done. It was certainly a surprise that Violet did not know how her luxuries were afforded.
02/01/15
Scam artists—especially those that target the elderly— are certainly the epitome of greed! Max is different in that he actually cares what he caused. Well done story!
02/05/15
great job trace! Congratulations on placing so well :-)you deserve it. This is exceptional work. That twist:o
02/05/15
Well done
02/05/15
Congrats on your excellent ranking! You've done an incredible job describing one of the worst crimes of this age. I loved the entire story--how you developed the characters, the development of the plot, and especially, the remorse of the MC. Thanks for a superb job!
02/05/15
Your story is chilling; the emotion is tangible. Wow! Excellent writing. Congrats on your Editor's Choice award!
02/07/15
Congratulations for your high ranking entry! I delighted in the visualization I experienced through your 'show-not-tell.'

Pensioner Suicide came as a sad surprise...

Excellent writing,

Wing His Words
03/22/15
Great writing! Sad story. Thanks for sharing:)