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10/09/14
I loved this poem! It brought back so many memories, though I was far from an accomplished skater. I so well remember that skate key and how treasured it was for the three of us girls. Your piece is so descriptive; it's impossible not to be carried right back to elementary school again. Thank you for the memories.
10/13/14
Awww...memories sweet of days gone by. My key was on a pink and white rope that I placed around my neck.

Loved this, thank you for sharing your days with us, especially one that I can relate!

God bless~
10/13/14
Loved this for its innocence and freedom. But then, when you're on a roll...
Great work.
10/14/14
This made me smile!
(I knew who Sonja Henie was.)
I didn't have ones with a key, but I did have roller skates.
10/14/14
Thank you for the memories. I haven't skated in years. But soaring like a bird sounds like so much fun. I think a future trip to our local skating rink is essential. Don't you?
I admire your ability. Both in writing and skating. As one who finds it difficult to stay upright without wheels under my feet, skates of any type have never been my area of expertise.

The image of the little girl bundled until she looked like a penguin was quite funny.
10/15/14
A wonderful chilhood reflection in rhyme, that told a memorable story of your young life skating by!
This is so lovely - thankyou for this beautiful poem revealing so eloquently your happy hours on skates in years gone by. The poem taught me much! I have to admit to never having heard of Sonja Henie! (Have just watched a video of her and read of her interesting life!) Thankyou for sharing these lovely times of your life.
10/16/14
The light and skipping tone of this was delightful. I felt lighter in spirit just having read it. A great thing. Congratulations!
10/17/14
So much imagery! Beautiful, as always, Verna. (And I was thrilled to see Sonja Henie's name when I was glancing through the titles, and I had to come and check it out right away.) Congratulations!
10/18/14
Congratulations!

I loved this.

God bless~
10/19/14
Congratulations Verna. I love your roller skating poem and the way you remember it now:
"In memory I'm like a bird, when on my skates I soar."
Lovely writing!