The Official Writing Challenge
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The most incredible thing happened to me while I read this entry.... I began to feel motion sick! I quite liked the way you started with a point and grew from that point until about halfway through, but then I lost track of your thought process, but I did feel sick, so perhaps that is my fault not yours. Except that the reason I felt sick was the physical appearance of the writing - how weird is that! Write well.
Great truths in here, but I'm not sure they are communicated at their best in this way, where they are densley packed together. Also, I didn't understand this line 'Is knowing that They are without each and individual as I AM.' - but perhaps that's just me. Thank you for reminding me of the peace that comes form knowing that I am part of GOd's great plan.
I enjoyed the truths you have in this, and suggest that reading it would have been much easier if you had put them into a format like this:

Personal Peace

Is knowing
with certainty
that there is life
after death,
that there truly is
Gods wonderful plan
for my
that Gods heart encompasses all
my sorrow,
pain, and