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If this was your experience I am so sorry. The betrayals of the world are so cruel! Well written reminder of how wonderful our real inheritence is!
It must be very difficult to be swindled out of what has been promised to you. I'm glad God isn't like that. You told your story well--took me right there with you--disappointed.
04/15/22
Some people are so crooked that when they die, they will have to be screwed into their graves! So saddened to read this story, which you know can happen so often, but you think will never happen to you. God bless you in the truth of his grace (2 Cor 1:3-5) as you grow on from here.
You did an awesome job of bringing this story to life. The conflicts pulled me in and held my attention to the end. I've heard many stories of how money or things have torn a family apart. My heart aches for your pain.