The Official Writing Challenge
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What a fun entry! It's the kind that's meant to be read aloud to a group or maybe at a church dinner. Your humorous touch on this great Biblical story makes me wish I could memorize it and repeat it before a group, using all kinds of voice changes and my arms flailing about.

I hope this wins big time! Kudos!
02/03/22
Oh my - this is great! I am pretty sure this will be in the top 3!
02/03/22
What a fun entry and a fresh way of retelling a familiar story. I especially love the ending. Great job.
02/04/22
Wow! This is simply fabulous!

You have such a unique gift, and an excellent way to reach out to the readers keeping them engrossed and enthralled at once!

Loved, loved, loved this.

Thanks for sharing God's truth in such a "fun way."

God Bless~
Poetry is not my strong suit by far, but this piece just oozes talent I wish I had. It was a fun read.
Clever, fun, fresh, humorous - just what I needed to read
Blessings
Congratulations!
This brought such a huge smile. What clever rhymes--only you! I wonder how many people have asked God not to raise the roof? Congratulations on recognition for your out-of-the-box creativity.
02/12/22
No big surprise here!

Congratulations Noel, for a well-deserved recognition on your unique and fabulous entry.

Blessings~