The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/21
My goodness! I hope this isn't a true story! I was glued to it, waiting for the outcome. It was a spellbinder, for sure!
This is a powerful story. The conflicts were perfect and kept me invested to the end. I was confused about name change from MacIntyre to Mac to Ricky, but then realized MacIntyre must be his last name. You did a great job on topic. The obvious weakness is in the cancer, but I appreciated the subtle weakness in father. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!