The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/20
I felt like the topic word was a little overused, but you certainly brought this story to life.
You really brought this story to life!
You did a fine job of describing the scene and bringing the story to life. I felt like I'd been taken back in time.
12/03/20
Conratulations Jack on a job well done!
12/03/20
Conratulations Jack on a job well done!
12/03/20
Well done. I particularly liked this line: “Get up!” said life to death.