The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This held me in rapt attention and did not fail. Well done!
Well written, well done!

This is a sad piece. I wish there was enough word-space to bring resolution for the man. I wondered if he was suffering dementia; but, by the end, I realized what was going on.

A minor critique, perhaps run this through grammarly (or a second pair of eyes) before submitting to be sure you've caught all the additions and deletions you were chasing.

Great writing!
This is an interesting piece. You grabbed my attention right from the beginning. I think it was creative, although the ending was a bit expected. Normally I'm not crazy about the pat ending of mysterious strangers being angels, but you handled it in an interesting way. Good job.
Oh, I loved this story in the way your told it. My mind on Scrooge!