The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This held me in rapt attention and did not fail. Well done!
10/20/19
Well written, well done!

Blessings~
10/20/19
This is a sad piece. I wish there was enough word-space to bring resolution for the man. I wondered if he was suffering dementia; but, by the end, I realized what was going on.

A minor critique, perhaps run this through grammarly (or a second pair of eyes) before submitting to be sure you've caught all the additions and deletions you were chasing.

Great writing!
~Blessings
This is an interesting piece. You grabbed my attention right from the beginning. I think it was creative, although the ending was a bit expected. Normally I'm not crazy about the pat ending of mysterious strangers being angels, but you handled it in an interesting way. Good job.
10/23/19
Oh, I loved this story in the way your told it. My mind on Scrooge!