The Official Writing Challenge
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Hey, you left me hanging! So what happened? Did he show up? Was he a decent guy? Did the relationship grow? It would be good to hear the rest of the story!
10/11/19
Come on...you have to let us know what happened?

Good story telling and on topic.

Blessings~
This was really interesting. You had a good conflict that drew me in. His refusal to her suggestions made me wonder if maybe rumors were true. I liked the ending though. It surprised me and that doesn't happen often.
10/17/19
What was the outcome? You had me all along and left me hanging. Good work!
10/17/19
For those who are asking about what happened next, I didn’t really choose a next chapter!
But if I were to do so now, I’d say he showed up, played some games, they had a great time but decided to stay “just friends”.... because God led her to The Right Guy just a few weeks later.
And, because I’m the author, I will say that although he wasn’t an angel with that previous girlfriend, the rumor WAS an exaggeration
10/18/19
Congrats on your EC.
10/24/19
Fantastic story! I wish it was read and discussed in youth groups! So proud of your MC.