The Official Writing Challenge
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Hey, you left me hanging! So what happened? Did he show up? Was he a decent guy? Did the relationship grow? It would be good to hear the rest of the story!
Come have to let us know what happened?

Good story telling and on topic.

This was really interesting. You had a good conflict that drew me in. His refusal to her suggestions made me wonder if maybe rumors were true. I liked the ending though. It surprised me and that doesn't happen often.
What was the outcome? You had me all along and left me hanging. Good work!
For those who are asking about what happened next, I didn’t really choose a next chapter!
But if I were to do so now, I’d say he showed up, played some games, they had a great time but decided to stay “just friends”.... because God led her to The Right Guy just a few weeks later.
And, because I’m the author, I will say that although he wasn’t an angel with that previous girlfriend, the rumor WAS an exaggeration
Congrats on your EC.
Fantastic story! I wish it was read and discussed in youth groups! So proud of your MC.