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Perfect title. I'm glad Shyna found the answer she was looking for.
This is a powerful story about dementia. It brought tears to my eyes. I could feel the love and passion as I read.
Oh I had tears at the ending. Such a poignant story. Well done!
What a well-written story! It was very easy to picture the confusion of the dementia. I got a little confused in paragraphs 5 and 6 of who was speaking, but I figured it out after reading it again. I love the fact that this woman held on to her faith. Powerful!
Masterfully told!
I did not grasp the meaning behind the story at the start, but it was well written so that I didn't feel confused. I loved how you tied in her questions of confusion with the strong memory from childhood and that all-important question of faith. Beautiful ending for such a difficult point in someone's life.