The Official Writing Challenge
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This has a foundation of a great story. I could see it as an outline for a novel. It feels a little too much for a 750 word story. I liked the characters but didn't really feel like I knew them because you did more telling than showing. It felt a little weak on topic, although you tried to tie it in with the stomach. I think it has great potential though. I thought the ending was fantastic. I really didn't see it coming, which rarely happens with me. Good job.
I was wondering where you were going with this romeo. I hope the female runs far away! This could be a longer story, as it has great potential. I think it was weak on the topic of sick, but you really had me hooked, wondering where this was going.