The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful and informational summary of Christ's time here on earth and in heaven. I can see you did quite a bit of Bible research. A great witness for others about reaching out and walking into a world of sin, and also sitting at the feet of Jesus. Great job!
A great devotional piece that simultaneously encourages and challenges us in our walk with Jesus. Well done.
This is lovely. It reads like a poem. Your words painted brilliant pictures and a great message to spread all over this world.
I liked your opening line- meek, yet strong! Well done!
This is a wonderful piece of writing!! I’m not even commenting on the biblical truths you shared about Jesus. They speak for themselves.

But I commend you for excellence in taking a difficult topic and presenting it with feeling, emotion, cleverness, with gripping power.

I can imagine Bill or Gloria Gaither (guess that dates me) reciting your piece to the perfect musical score in the background, starting out strong but growing more powerful as the reading progresses, dying down to a soulful lullaby, and souls will feel goosebumps at the awesomeness of Jesus.

I feel this piece was anointed. I’m wondering if you experienced God's presence in a special way as you wrote this piece?
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish, Christian.

This piece of writing is well researched and emotionally gripping.

Well done!

Congratulations on your win.

God Bless~