The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/18
I love your take on this topic, and can almost picture everything that's going on "behind the scenes" in disobedience to the evil government. What a positive response to an oppressive system!
This is interesting. You've a great idea here. Some of the sentences are a bit long and could bog the reader down. I'd love to see more showing than telling by using dialog, thought, and body language. Your message is a strong one. You did a great job of writing on topic too. I also liked the Bible verse you used. I think it tied your story and message together nicely. Good job.