The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/18
Love it, love it, love it !! It's a different take on the subject which will surely get the attention of the judges. I'll look forward to seeing your name on the winner's list !!
10/11/18
A nice take on the topic. You got me with the last line. Well done.
10/11/18
Sounds great - looks even better - without the ads...
Very clever.
10/11/18
Sounds great - looks even better - without the ads...
Very clever.
I read through your poem and thought it was okay in a sing-song kind of way, but a little confused about what you were watching.

But after ready the above comments I went back for a second read. NOW I am impressed. What a wonderful take on the beautiful scenes and memories our mind can show us. Great piece.
10/12/18
Very clever and thought provoking!! Makes me really appreciate the beauty of the creative mind!
10/13/18
Great work here. I too, wasn't expecting the last line. I'm impressed!
10/13/18
Nice job with the topic.
Blessings~
Wow! This is an impressive example of how to take the topic and make it a devotion. The poetry is wonderfully lyrical and well designed;and kept me guessing until the last line. Well done!
10/13/18
No disparity in your clarity for your TV.
10/13/18
"It's my God given memory." Excellent take on the topic.
I liked how you put it all together in the last four lines.

Well written and it shows an alternate way.
10/18/18
CONGRATULATIONS !! A well-deserved win to add to your winning streak. KUDOS !! ♥
10/18/18
Great take on the topic! You deserve that win!
10/18/18
Congratulations on your placing, Verna. Well done.
11/02/18
Congratulations on placing 2nd place this week, Verna.

I'm so glad God gives us such beautiful images to watch.