The Official Writing Challenge
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This excellently written poem made my heart ache for the hurt that comes with chronic illness--but rejoice in the knowledge of God's care.
09/06/18
Sadly, this is the heart cry of many Christians and I was touched by the depth of your pain. But, as you said so eloquently, we wait on the Lord for comfort, relief and healing. Thank you for opening your heart to us.
Well written as I could feel the emotion in this piece. Good Job!
09/08/18
Thanks for sharing your heart with us in this honest and well written piece.

It is indeed the cry of many individuals suffering from a Chronic and debilitating illness, but brings witness to the faithful...

God bless you~
This speaks so beautifully for many people who don't know how to voice these troubles. I think it will also help those who can't understand how just making it to the bathroom is a great day. It's a harsh reality for many, yet your words express the hope for so many, many who are also afraid to have hope. Jesus does understand suffering, frustration, even anger,and because he gets all of that, it makes the hope all the more beautiful and even reachable. I wish no one could relate to this piece, especially you, but that's not the reality. So many either struggle with a chronic illness or love someone who struggles. Your words will touch so many hearts. I think this is why it touches my heart so much...because it is so real.
09/13/18
Congratulations on your EC and powerful writing. Thank you for sharing your heart with us,

Blessings~
09/14/18
A well-deserved win, Laurie. You, Verna and I are on a roll now. Isn't it great? Kudos !
09/14/18
Very powerful. Congratulations!