The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great take on the topic. I really enjoyed it. It pulled me in right away. I was a bit confused at first because when you described home, I pictured a house. I think if I knew he was on a ship right away, it might have helped. The message is a great one though, and it's unique and fresh. I was smiling at the end.
08/14/18
Very thought provoking.
Cleverly written. I was drawn in right to the end. I agree the floorboards and mention of home were a little confusing at first, but otherwise an interesting take on the topic.