The Official Writing Challenge
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This brought tears to my eyes. You did a great job of creating a sense of suspense right away. This MC could have been my brother when Mom died 25 years ago. It's wonderful how God can turn a tragedy into a blessing if we allow him. You nailed the topic while delivering a profound message.
08/14/18
Great story. Well told.
08/14/18
Great story. Well told.
08/16/18
Congratulations on your 2nd Place ranking! So many good messages for all of us in this story. Well done.
08/17/18
Well done. Great emotive story.
Congratulations on 2nd place.
I love your ending, tying it back in with Jesus' sacrifice. Well done.