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This brought tears to my eyes. You did a great job of creating a sense of suspense right away. This MC could have been my brother when Mom died 25 years ago. It's wonderful how God can turn a tragedy into a blessing if we allow him. You nailed the topic while delivering a profound message.
Great story. Well told.
Great story. Well told.
Congratulations on your 2nd Place ranking! So many good messages for all of us in this story. Well done.
Well done. Great emotive story.
Congratulations on 2nd place.
I love your ending, tying it back in with Jesus' sacrifice. Well done.