The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/18
I like how the storm brought strangers together. Looks like God orchestrated one of his divine appointment moments. The dialogue was well-done and believable. The only red ink I have is some of paragraphs had no breaks between them. The dialogue in the middle should have been broken up into paragraphs as well. Even after saying that this was a fun story to read. Instead of complaining about the snow and cold, I like the ending where the husband recognized the goodness in day.
08/01/18
This was a very endearing story. I loved how the neighbors were all drawn closer.