The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/18
I like your MC so much. My heart broke for her. I loved it when she took of her shoes and walked in the rain.
This story is filled with beautiful imagery of nostalgia.
08/01/18
Beautiful story! Beautiful mc!
08/02/18
I missed this first time around but I’m so glad it was brought to my attention now. I’ve got an ache in my gut that only great writing brings. I really loved this!
08/04/18
I loved your story. Very sweet and brought tears to my eyes. Well done.
08/06/18
As usual, you capture life and unleash it on all of us like a refreshing rain. Blessings.
08/08/18
Congratulations! I love the rhythm and crispness of your writing style and you captured the MC’s nostalgia with a tenderness that drew me in to her world-present & past. Such a joy to read.
08/17/18
Your beautiful story mirrors some memories my parents had. Thank you for the sweet memories and congratulations on your first place. God bless.