The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/18
Wow! I don't know if I can put into words in expressing what your story did to me. Powerful story. Well written. Excellent in all aspects of story writing. Truly a masterpiece.
A fitting title and ending to a well written story. Great craftsmanship here.
Masterful writing for an unforgettable story. Well done!
07/31/18
Excellent, emotional story telling.

For some reason, I was a little confused in the transition from the first paragraph to the rest of the story. I couldn't tell what timeframe that first paragraph fit into.
08/08/18
Congrats on your 2nd place ranking. You did a wonderful job telling the story from the perspective of the young MC-very authentic. I’m left wanting to know more about what happened to them before and after these events.