The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/18
Whoa! I thought for sure Henry was a goner. Incredible story of protection. Enjoyed it immensely from beginning to end.
07/30/18
Wow! Great development of this story. I can't imagine how scary it would be to ride out a hurricane like that! Of course, now I want to know Henry's perspective and what he did during that hurricane!
I loved the excitement in your excellently written story, but even more, the wonderful descriptions. they put me right there with the hurricane, and I was glad the storm passed over. What a wonderful conclusion!