The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/18
Those first two paragraphs were powerful word pictures. I could see it all. My grandpa was the same way...he used nature and his old bones to predict the weather too. Thanks for a fun walk down memory lane.
07/30/18
I enjoyed this story with all the descriptions and nostalgic feel. Great job tying it into Jesus' comments about the weather as well.
Grandpa won my heart in this story, but my favorite parts were the wonderful descriptions. The first part is poetic prose.