The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/18
Well done. I like the flow of this piece. Good take on the topic. Powerful imagery, especially in the next to last stanza. I'm always impressed with folks who can successfully write poetry free-style since I can't.
07/30/18
Beautiful! I love the rain and could hear the progression of it throughout.
07/30/18
What an unusual, beautiful approach to the subject. I love all the instruments you brought in, each contributing its unique specialty to create the finished masterpiece. But most of all, I love the last line about the conductor, our great creator and Lord of the universe. Well done ! Kudos!
08/02/18
You masterfully wove together both sight and sound, much to the enjoyment of this reader. Great job!