The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the contrast you develop between the rich man and Lazarus. Perhaps word limitation kept you from the rest of the story, verses 23 to 31, but with tighter writing, the rich man's concern for his brothers could contribute significantly to your message. Even so, an enjoyable read.
Great job with the descriptions. I enjoyed the way you moved the narrative along and the inclusion of the kind hearted dog.
This piece is painfully relevant to our present-day America. The many homeless people we see while others live in extreme luxury.

Good job!