The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting take on the neighborhood news. I liked your characters. The dialog might need a little tweaking just to make it sound more authentic. Overall, though I think you did a fine job of presenting and resolving conflicts. Your message is a great one. It shows how something innocent and sweet can be seen so differently from another set of eyes. Good job.
07/14/18
Great job with interesting characters and a creative take on the topic. Since there was one negative reaction, I would have liked to see what she learned about from it in the conclusion.