The Official Writing Challenge
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06/18/18
I've read quite a bit about WWII but I've never heard about this group or the importance of the work they did. It was fun to be introduced to this new group of heroes.

While I enjoyed your voice and style of writing, it seems that the amount of words you used hindered you from bringing this interesting and informative piece to a clear conclusion. The ending felt rather abrupt.