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06/14/18
I am so sorry about your diagnosis. God does indeed have this. He's already there when the biopsy results are known.

Such raw emotions and good visual imagery. The teen with Stage 4 Hodgkin's Lymphoma, how did he beat the disease with an imminent death? Perhaps expound on his faith in God or his attitude or approach to his diagnosis. That paragraph seemed like it needed a bit extra.

Well done. I'll be praying for you.
06/16/18
Thank you for your raw, honest sharing of this part of your journey. I could really feel your emotions in each part of your narrative.

Praying for you!
06/16/18
What a wonderful read of your amazing journey. Great article!
06/16/18
Also I need to let you know, I will be lifting you up in prayer. God bless you.
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!
You did a great job of pulling me in right away. My heart ached as I read and could feel your fears and the way God wrote little love notes to you.
Sorry, you were 12th overall. Still great job.