The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/18
I enjoyed this sweet story of first love. Your descriptions are beautiful and capture their personalities. Great writing!
06/16/18
Aww... This was a very endearing, well-written story. It was fun to see her journey.
06/22/18
So sweet! Congratulations!
06/30/18
Enjoyed the way you wrote
this with paragraphs all starting 'The first time'.
Drew me into finding out 'what
next?'. Good work.