The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/18
I really enjoyed your story. I could just imagine this happening with the voices and laughter escalating. Seemed very real to me. Nice job!
Loved this laugh-out-loud story of children's church.
Cheers!
You were brilliant in the dialogue between the kids and Dan when retelling the Bible lesson. Awesome creativity. But I feel so dumb because I can’t figure out who or what Dan is and who was he making comments to?? I must be missing something.
06/10/18
Great job with this entertaining story. I could see and hear the story unfolding in my mind.
06/11/18
Loved this creative ways to get the kids excited and engaged... the writer must be a teacher as well..
Thanks for sharing!
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!