The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/18
Great visual imagination as I read your descriptive wording!

Wing His Words
02/09/18
You have presented a unique--and colorful--take on this familiar lesson. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing a great message in "technicolor".
02/10/18
Cool story!
02/11/18
Very descriptive and absorbing interpretation of the wide and narrow roads that we all must choose between. Well done.
02/12/18
The ending, with the voice of evil sounding very compelling--until she hears the true voice of God--makes for a highly effective allegory. I appreciated your unique approach.
02/15/18
Congratulations on your 9th place win, C.D.

Your ending gave me goosebumps.
Wow what a powerful piece. This is one of the best I've read this week. You really touched my heart. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!