The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/17
I like the line about Lois being the kind of girl who would go with them--not just her predictable self.
11/30/17
Congratulations Jan! This is a beautifully written piece. Held my attention from beginning to end.

But, I have to say, I’m struggling to see the Christian World View here. It seems conflicting to that view.
Love your imagination and your ability to write it wonderfully.
11/30/17
Congratulations on your 1st place finish, Jan.
11/30/17
Congratulations, Jan! Well done. :-)