The Official Writing Challenge
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11/09/17
Great poem. I can totally relate to your dilemma. Nice job.
11/09/17
I love this! It's witty, flows well and is so true!!
I just wonder about the rhyming scheme in the fifth paragraph...the three rooms or more doesn't rhyme with computer so it seems to break the flow there.
Other than that, it's awesome!
11/10/17
This gave me a good laugh. Well paced and “user friendly!” :)

Well done!
11/10/17
Nicely done!
Blessings~
11/10/17
Awesome! I can so relate. Great job!
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!
11/16/17
Congratulations on your 11th place finish, Verna.

Technology isn't always my friend either. Today my computer screen turned black, but fortunately my brother was able to fix the problem.