The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/17
Fun poem. At least Ivy didn't look down on Holly (at least not mentally).
08/27/17
Awww...nicely expressed!
Blessings~
I liked the story. This could be used as a good teaching lesson about the possible woes of a dare.

This may not divide you poem/story up evenly but could you put a space between what each was saying or doing? The readers might be able to keep track of who was doing the talking easier.

08/31/17
Congratulations on your 8th place finish, Verna.

I was almost sure this was your poem; I notice that you must enjoy gardening since many of your poems are about plants.
Verna,

I liked the message of the poem interwoven between the Holly hock and the ivy

You have a green thumb in writing poems.

Congratulations on your EC award