The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/17
Such a cute surprise ending. You had me on the edge of my seat wondering where the MC was going. Great job!
08/25/17
I once had a panic attack in a dentist's office. It is not always the most pleasant experience.

My favorite line: My blood pressure rose higher than Everest.

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08/27/17
Boy can I ever relate to this story. I have "dental phobia" each time I go for my check-ups, I "white knuckle" my entire time in the chair!

Good job,
Blessings~
You used words to show emotions through-out your piece. The only change was when the student showed up but at this time, it was all over but a sigh of relief I could hear faintly expressed.

I don't like dentists but I did like this.
08/31/17
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish, Amy.
Amy,

Congratulations on your 3rd place finish.

I loved that you wanted to call your mom to calm your nerves but thought better of it.

Cute ending.