The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/17
This was a fun story. I enjoyed the interaction between the grandpa and the child and the creative elaboration on the proverbs verse.
There was one area where it seemed there was some dialogue missing - where the grandpa says,"of course you can..."
I loved the line about the ant about to crawl into his mouth! I guess we can all take a lesson from the ant.
07/31/17
Well done! great story for a Sunday School class. While you are at it, maybe send a copy to the Republican and Democrats in both houses. Sigh.