The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/17
Good job in communicating the emotion in this poetry. I could feel the frustration and desperation in the middle, the humble plea for help at the end.
08/08/17
Congratulations Melanie. This is very powerful poetry. I like the way you were daring in your words. I was wondering if this was a Psalm reworked. Then I saw it was based on 1 Kings 18, which I'm now going to read!
08/09/17
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish, Melanie.