The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/17
I hated going to the outhouse at camp and I don't think I could cut off the head of a chicken either. I hope the MC was rewarded with a wonderful birthday party.
I certainly didn't see the ending coming. You did a nice job developing the characters. I liked your take on the topic.
06/07/17
I enjoyed this story and agree you did a good job developing your characters and the relationship between them. I remember when my little brother, Jim and I (we were probably five and six) went walking by our grandfather's woodshed as he chopped the head off a chicken. That chicken chased my terrified brother turn for turn with blood spurting from his neck. It was a picture I will never forget.