The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/17
Wonderful description! Who knew it was possible to articulate so well what was being thought and felt when in bed with the flu?
05/21/17
Right on topic! You kept me reading and interested right through, even though the MC was describing her extreme boredom. Great writing.
05/22/17
Interesting and nice approach to the topic.

Blessings~
05/23/17
Outstanding way to nail a topic. I will certainly use this as a model for my future descriptive writing.

I hope some of those just beginning the writing process read this. So powerful in its active picture making.

It flowed from scene to scene with such ease and enticement.

The next time I get the flu I will be thinking of this story. I don't like the smell of bleach either.

This goes on to be one of my favorite stories. God bless.
05/24/17
Masterly done, shouldn't be surprised to see this in the winners.
I absolutely love this. I found myself smiling throughout. I also worry that you somehow got inside of my head and copied my thoughts. I could definitely be Sarah. I've even had the argument about it being impossible to think of nothing. I thought this was delightful.