The Official Writing Challenge
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04/23/17
Well done!

Blessings~
04/23/17
Quite intriguing. Great imagery. I felt like I was there.
Blessings
I really enjoyed reading this, and the imagery was very convincing. It was very millenial-ish and successful in that regard.
One small bit of red ink: I was a little surprised to read a repetition of the pamphlet in the description of the talk.Either the pamphlet or the talk could have been different.
I loved the story behind the name 'Skeeter'.
I predict this will be in the winners circle and I have not even read the others.
04/25/17
Compelling - could be part of a longer story, or a novel.