The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/17
Great story that made me smile!

Some of the dialogue seemed to modern for the time period to me, but that may have been by design. In any case, it's a very enjoyable read.
03/22/17
Great story with an uplifting ending. Well written.
Congratulations on ranking 18 overall. Happy Dance.